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This is my first try, trying to incorporate the Torred's tutorial. Not sure if it worked, but enjoy. This should be a bargain priced sportster like a Sunfire.

 

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I think the tutorial in perspective is helping. This car looks more correctly proportioned than your other efforts. Yes, it would be nice if Pontiac had a unique small car.
 

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ooooo.... i like alot. constructive criticism here, but a sightly lower roof line imo?
 

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Well, as for the roofline, I did it intentionally, to make it look a bit more conventional than a true sports car, like Sunfire was, which had a sporty look but it wasn't a sports car. I kinda burrowed old Porsche 911 for that, though it didn't really came out that well, making it look funny and bulky rather. :)
 

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Well, as for the roofline, I did it intentionally, to make it look a bit more conventional than a true sports car, like Sunfire was, which had a sporty look but it wasn't a sports car. I kinda burrowed old Porsche 911 for that, though it didn't really came out that well, making it look funny and bulky rather. :)

got ya. nice.
 

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It's good - it reminds me of Nissan's 350/370Z, which isn't a bad thing at all.

Lose the halo head restraints, hike the grille and headlights up a little more, and you've got a winner.
 

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When you draw your boxes, try putting a few extra lines on the front of it. Horizontal ones. That way you can make sure your headlights are on the same horizontal line. The passenger side lights and, therefore, the rest of the passenger side face, is ****ed up a bit compared to the driver side.

Other than that, great to see you incorporating advice!
 
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